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FT: Thank God it's cold by *Alina-chan:iconAlina-chan:


©2009 *Alina-chan
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Please don't ask why they're standing in the rain, CAUSE I DON'T KNOW. D:
They're just insane like that, I guess?

... But what else is new?



Natsu Dragonil & Lucy Heartphilia (c) Mashima Hiro

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:iconginny-chan:
Its adorable.
I just love your drawing style. Everything, to me, is just perfect.
I love how he's holding her. Its just SO CUTE! *_*
<3
:icontristefleur:
ADJGKFFFFFFF!!!!
This has got to be one of my favorite NaLu pics from you. The coloring, the poses, the atmosphere...it's all so fluffyyy. :heart: :heart: :heart:

:iconiloveitplz:

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:iconxi-hypocrisy-ix:
cute =]

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:iconfox-gurl:
Oh gawsh Alina, I really like how this came out. The visible breath and the way he is holding her is cute and romantic.

P.S did you see the Anime trailer yet??

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Natsu: FREEDOOM!!! -runs around-
Lucy: . . . he should have stayed in jail longer . . .

Natsu :heart: Lucy
:iconlinearmango:
I can't do a formal review because I have the free account, so I'll just comment here.

I love the composition of the piece. It's beauty comes from the simplicity and immediately your attention focuses on the two characters without any distractions.

Overall body language and expression is really good and everything looks anatomically correct. The point is that its cold and it gives them a reason to be close, I could see that without having to use the title as a reference. I love that you can see their breath, but I feel like they should be a little more transparent.

The coloring is also very nice as well and reflects the time of day.

The one thing that bothers me is that the Natsu and Lucy are standing in the rain, but their clothes arn't wet, nor is their skin. At least, I really can't see that in their clothing/skin. I can tell a little by Natsu's hair but that's really it.

Overall, I love this piece! It's a very Natsu/Lucy thing to do, regardless of what their reason is. You captured the mood and the environment beautifully!

Even though it's not official, these are my ratings:

Vision: 4/5
Originality: 4/5
Technique: 4.5/5
Impact: 5/5

Hope this is constructive and helpful towards you!
:iconalina-chan:
Thank you so much for this!
I always love to receive good and useful critique. :)
:iconalina-chan:
I sure did! Damn, I actually squealed out loud at Natsu's voice! XD
It was just kickass. Love the animation. :D
:iconocean-sarina:
fantastic composition

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:iconsayajin-kun:
They stand in the rain cuz they wanted to snuggle ofc! :iconfufuplz:

I think the idea is very cute and the coloring is so soft and the feeling is so... I just go "aaaaw" when I see this. > v <

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